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The Shadow Pope
- Joined
- Jan 6, 1995
- Messages
- 2,192
- Points
- 36
- Age
- 45
- Location
- Top of the Pile
- Website
- www.valeriansgarden.com
OOC: So I have no intention on altering my RP style because I'm telling the story I want, but a few of the other judges and writers I respect said that they thought my first round posts were a bit long. So I'm going to put the flashbacks here for convenience sake.
SOME TIME AGO…
The front door opened and Eli stepped through.
“Hello?” he called out, but there was no response.
Eli closed the door and looked around: it had been over three years since he and his family had purchased this house in Warwick, New York, and at the age of thirty six had become a first – time homeowner for the simple reason that he wanted his daughter to have a nice place to grow up.
Six months of renovations and refittings made the place habitable for their needs: a fully functional recording studio in the basement meant that his wife, Angel, wouldn’t have to keep travelling to Los Angeles to record with her band. Plus, since they operated out of their home, the band could stay here for free while working.
He walked straight from the front door into the kitchen and made an immediate left turn, there was a light on just above an intercom, the light told him that there was some kind of recording taking place: caution was to be had when going downstairs. Yes, everything was soundproofed, but it makes more sense to give everyone full disclosure.
Particularly when the recording studio includes a bubbly, extroverted nine year old with a ton of friends.
Eli opened the basement door and quietly entered the studio.
“I don’t know why
I can’t get through this
I don’t know why
I never let go
Every night and day
It’s the same old chorus
Same old sh*t
That you already know”
He caught his wife’s eye through the soundproof glass – she didn’t return his smile.
That’s fine, she’s ‘in character’ right now.
The guitar player for the Garden, Mick Rodriguez, was at the sound board – slash – control booth. Years ago, he and Angel were an item. This might have caused friction in the band, or between him and Eli, but the issues they had were partly caused by his rampant alcoholism and partly exacerbated by their old manager.
Both of those issues have been taken care of, so there were no more problems.
”So fix me now
Just fix me now
Please fix me now.”
“How’s the session?” asked Eli.
“She’s battling,” replied Mick, “Still has a sore throat.”
Eli listened for another few seconds. “It doesn’t sound like it,” he observed.
Mick shrugged. “That’s why I said ‘battling.’”
“There’s a miles-wide pit
Deep inside my heart
And nobody can see
That it’s tearing me apart
And all I ever want—COUGH COUGH F'CK!”
Angel threw her headphones to the floor inside the recording pit.
“Calm down,” said Mick, through the intercom, “Take a break, we’ll come back to it.”
She closed her eyes and nodded, and exited the studio, obviously angry at herself.
“You sounded great in there,” said Eli, trying to help.
“Thanks,” said Angel, “unfortunately, you’re wrong.”
She reached for a thermal mug with a lid on it, and Eli knew what was in it before she even sipped: hot water, a regular Lipton teabag, a regular Earl Gray teabag, and plenty of ginger and honey. Every time Angel did vocals in a studio, she somehow got a sore throat.
Ironically, their last tour was fourteen months long and she was the only member of the entourage that didn’t get sick.
Finally, Angel hugged her husband and settled into his chest with a contented sigh.
“I missed you,” she said, the same as every other time he spent a night in the city, “How did things go?”
“Typical night at the bar,” replied Eli, as he kissed the top of her head, “except we were welcoming Cally back after she got hurt. Few idiots that I had to toss, but other than that it was just another night.”
“Good,” said Angel, “She looked like she was doing better?”
“She did,” said Eli. “Hey, where’s the kid? I called out for anyone when I got home but nobody answered.”
Angel tensed in his arms. “MJ’s in her room,” she said, “she was at her friend Jayne’s house earlier but called me, very upset, saying she wanted to come home. She didn’t talk to me about it and went straight to her room when we got here. I tried to get her to tell me what was bothering her but she insisted that everything was fine.”
“Okay,” said Eli, waiting.
“She then asked, in her next breath, when you were getting home.”
Translated subtext: Eli, go talk to your daughter.
“I’m on it,” said Eli.
He kissed her on top of the head again and let her out of his grasp. Eli bumped fists with Mick before turning around and going back upstairs. This was the dynamic they agreed on without ever having to discuss it: for the first four years of Mariella’s life, Angel had her on the tour bus and really took the lead on her care and raising. Ever since 2007, other than the isolated spots where Eli was on the road, he was taking the lead on parental issues, particularly when Angel was recording.
They were about as equal as any two parents could ever be when it comes to raising a child; the decision on who took the lead was almost wordlessly worked out every time.
Up the stairs to the second floor, Eli passed by a series of framed and hanging photographs, involving music industry types from the boys in Type O Negative to the boys in Killcode, to Alice Cooper to Rob Zombie, to Trent Reznor to Ozzy himself, all with Angel and MJ, or all three of them. Eli had a tendency to tap the picture of himself, the Garden, MJ, and the whole of Type O Negative, because it included the late, great, Peter Steel holding Mariella in his arms. She really did love her Uncle Pete.
At the top of the stairs, Eli turned right and knocked on his daughter’s bedroom door.
“MJ?” he asked, as he cracked the door and pushed it open.
“Hi Daddy,” said his daughter, distracted.
Eli peeked in and saw that she was drawing. Even at the tender age of nine, he was impressed by her artistic ability; give her a few hours and she could do photorealistic drawings of anyone you showed her a picture of. The only thing she was more talented at than drawing was mimicking the guitar playing of the greats.
Seriously: she won her third grade talent show with a cover of Dylan’s “All Along the Watchtower.” Her parents started the standing ovation.
Mariella Jade Flair was sitting at her desk, drawing with a sharpened pencil. On the bed next to her, her five year old calico cat Isis was soundly napping. It was a nice change, Isis was typically a terror.
“Mom told me there was a problem today at Jayne’s, do you want to talk about it?”
“No,” answered MJ, too quickly.
“Okay,” said Eli, “but you know we always talk about things in this family, right?”
She stopped drawing.
“Daddy,” she asked.
“Yes, sweetie?”
“You’re not taking advantage of Mommy, right?” asked MJ.
The question actually took him by surprise.
“What do you mean?” asked Eli.
“I was at Jayne’s house today,” continued MJ, “and her parents were both home and I heard her mom say to her dad that you didn’t have a job, and he said that that must mean you’re a loser and a freeloader and a gold digger and that you’re taking advantage of Mommy. I told Jayne her daddy was a liar, and she yelled at me and I said I wanted to go home.”
Eli took a deep breath. This was a conversation he wasn’t looking forward to.
“Now, MJ sweetie,” he said, “you know Daddy isn’t taking advantage of Mommy. You know Daddy was working real hard when you were just a baby to pay the bills and now that you’re a little older, it’s Mommy’s turn right?”
“I know,” said MJ, as she finally turned her head toward her father, “But Jayne’s daddy is the same age as you and he’s always at work, she told me. How come you’re not always at work?”
It was a good question.
Frankly, at this moment, Eli kind of wished his daughter asked him where babies come from.
SOME TIME AGO…
The front door opened and Eli stepped through.
“Hello?” he called out, but there was no response.
Eli closed the door and looked around: it had been over three years since he and his family had purchased this house in Warwick, New York, and at the age of thirty six had become a first – time homeowner for the simple reason that he wanted his daughter to have a nice place to grow up.
Six months of renovations and refittings made the place habitable for their needs: a fully functional recording studio in the basement meant that his wife, Angel, wouldn’t have to keep travelling to Los Angeles to record with her band. Plus, since they operated out of their home, the band could stay here for free while working.
He walked straight from the front door into the kitchen and made an immediate left turn, there was a light on just above an intercom, the light told him that there was some kind of recording taking place: caution was to be had when going downstairs. Yes, everything was soundproofed, but it makes more sense to give everyone full disclosure.
Particularly when the recording studio includes a bubbly, extroverted nine year old with a ton of friends.
Eli opened the basement door and quietly entered the studio.
“I don’t know why
I can’t get through this
I don’t know why
I never let go
Every night and day
It’s the same old chorus
Same old sh*t
That you already know”
He caught his wife’s eye through the soundproof glass – she didn’t return his smile.
That’s fine, she’s ‘in character’ right now.
The guitar player for the Garden, Mick Rodriguez, was at the sound board – slash – control booth. Years ago, he and Angel were an item. This might have caused friction in the band, or between him and Eli, but the issues they had were partly caused by his rampant alcoholism and partly exacerbated by their old manager.
Both of those issues have been taken care of, so there were no more problems.
”So fix me now
Just fix me now
Please fix me now.”
“How’s the session?” asked Eli.
“She’s battling,” replied Mick, “Still has a sore throat.”
Eli listened for another few seconds. “It doesn’t sound like it,” he observed.
Mick shrugged. “That’s why I said ‘battling.’”
“There’s a miles-wide pit
Deep inside my heart
And nobody can see
That it’s tearing me apart
And all I ever want—COUGH COUGH F'CK!”
Angel threw her headphones to the floor inside the recording pit.
“Calm down,” said Mick, through the intercom, “Take a break, we’ll come back to it.”
She closed her eyes and nodded, and exited the studio, obviously angry at herself.
“You sounded great in there,” said Eli, trying to help.
“Thanks,” said Angel, “unfortunately, you’re wrong.”
She reached for a thermal mug with a lid on it, and Eli knew what was in it before she even sipped: hot water, a regular Lipton teabag, a regular Earl Gray teabag, and plenty of ginger and honey. Every time Angel did vocals in a studio, she somehow got a sore throat.
Ironically, their last tour was fourteen months long and she was the only member of the entourage that didn’t get sick.
Finally, Angel hugged her husband and settled into his chest with a contented sigh.
“I missed you,” she said, the same as every other time he spent a night in the city, “How did things go?”
“Typical night at the bar,” replied Eli, as he kissed the top of her head, “except we were welcoming Cally back after she got hurt. Few idiots that I had to toss, but other than that it was just another night.”
“Good,” said Angel, “She looked like she was doing better?”
“She did,” said Eli. “Hey, where’s the kid? I called out for anyone when I got home but nobody answered.”
Angel tensed in his arms. “MJ’s in her room,” she said, “she was at her friend Jayne’s house earlier but called me, very upset, saying she wanted to come home. She didn’t talk to me about it and went straight to her room when we got here. I tried to get her to tell me what was bothering her but she insisted that everything was fine.”
“Okay,” said Eli, waiting.
“She then asked, in her next breath, when you were getting home.”
Translated subtext: Eli, go talk to your daughter.
“I’m on it,” said Eli.
He kissed her on top of the head again and let her out of his grasp. Eli bumped fists with Mick before turning around and going back upstairs. This was the dynamic they agreed on without ever having to discuss it: for the first four years of Mariella’s life, Angel had her on the tour bus and really took the lead on her care and raising. Ever since 2007, other than the isolated spots where Eli was on the road, he was taking the lead on parental issues, particularly when Angel was recording.
They were about as equal as any two parents could ever be when it comes to raising a child; the decision on who took the lead was almost wordlessly worked out every time.
Up the stairs to the second floor, Eli passed by a series of framed and hanging photographs, involving music industry types from the boys in Type O Negative to the boys in Killcode, to Alice Cooper to Rob Zombie, to Trent Reznor to Ozzy himself, all with Angel and MJ, or all three of them. Eli had a tendency to tap the picture of himself, the Garden, MJ, and the whole of Type O Negative, because it included the late, great, Peter Steel holding Mariella in his arms. She really did love her Uncle Pete.
At the top of the stairs, Eli turned right and knocked on his daughter’s bedroom door.
“MJ?” he asked, as he cracked the door and pushed it open.
“Hi Daddy,” said his daughter, distracted.
Eli peeked in and saw that she was drawing. Even at the tender age of nine, he was impressed by her artistic ability; give her a few hours and she could do photorealistic drawings of anyone you showed her a picture of. The only thing she was more talented at than drawing was mimicking the guitar playing of the greats.
Seriously: she won her third grade talent show with a cover of Dylan’s “All Along the Watchtower.” Her parents started the standing ovation.
Mariella Jade Flair was sitting at her desk, drawing with a sharpened pencil. On the bed next to her, her five year old calico cat Isis was soundly napping. It was a nice change, Isis was typically a terror.
“Mom told me there was a problem today at Jayne’s, do you want to talk about it?”
“No,” answered MJ, too quickly.
“Okay,” said Eli, “but you know we always talk about things in this family, right?”
She stopped drawing.
“Daddy,” she asked.
“Yes, sweetie?”
“You’re not taking advantage of Mommy, right?” asked MJ.
The question actually took him by surprise.
“What do you mean?” asked Eli.
“I was at Jayne’s house today,” continued MJ, “and her parents were both home and I heard her mom say to her dad that you didn’t have a job, and he said that that must mean you’re a loser and a freeloader and a gold digger and that you’re taking advantage of Mommy. I told Jayne her daddy was a liar, and she yelled at me and I said I wanted to go home.”
Eli took a deep breath. This was a conversation he wasn’t looking forward to.
“Now, MJ sweetie,” he said, “you know Daddy isn’t taking advantage of Mommy. You know Daddy was working real hard when you were just a baby to pay the bills and now that you’re a little older, it’s Mommy’s turn right?”
“I know,” said MJ, as she finally turned her head toward her father, “But Jayne’s daddy is the same age as you and he’s always at work, she told me. How come you’re not always at work?”
It was a good question.
Frankly, at this moment, Eli kind of wished his daughter asked him where babies come from.