SenorJames
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You know the drill, read the show, post some feedback, get to it.
You know the drill, read the show, post some feedback, get to it.
GG#7 IS LIVE - FEED THE BACKS!
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JeffOLW
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We got entirely too few feedbacks for the last card, and Justin and I are considering holding this one hostage if people don't have anything to say.
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EDIT: Feeding back as I go!
EDIT #2: Finding that "seg by seg" isn't working super well from me, and is leading to this being half-complete. Next card will be more of the "best of" style.
Show Opening
Great to have a rundown of each match this time, and that whole segment with Heidi was great. The match she's referencing with Dane was before my time, but the use of visceral imagery makes me want to go back and see what the hell happened, and that's always a good thing when going over personal history. Solid work, and it's a nice twist on the open challenge to have it go unanswered.
Curtis Penn vs. Frank Dylan James
The match itself showed the totally selfish-yet-violent Penn in all his glory, with sprinkled in bits of FDJ's potential for redneck blind rage, and that's great. Angus's commentary was a little off to me, sort of going back and forth between no-selling the competitors and being REALLY EXCITED about it and then snoring again. I think the extremes could just use a little more leveled next time.
Troll Hard
Ty Walker and Jonny Booya were hilarious here, and seeing the fun character work from Jonny in particular made me want to change things I did in the match I wrote later in the card! Just fun stuff.
Poor Francis
Edward White is just coooold here. Keep this going, it makes me really want to know how FDJ can get out of this mess.
Chalk One Up For The Good Guys
Diego de Leon was the star of this one for me, both in humor and in recapping his exploits vs Capital Punishment last card. TexMex Holiday are obviously good buds, and I'm a sucker for "wrestling friends".
Henry Keyes vs. Jonny Booya
I wrote this one so I won't comment, except to say thanks to all y'all who have had positive things to say!
Disrespectful Heathens
The pairing of the "oh you'll DQ if I cheat again? Let me kick this guy square in the nuts while staring at you" Penn alongside the "you see how much I dominated that guy I sent a MESSAGE" Penn is just classic heel work and very well done. Slight miscommunication between us led to my later segment having dialogue that didn't make QUITE as much sense if Dane already booked it, but it's not the end of the world.
More to come as I read it and have time to write long things...
EDIT #2: Finding that "seg by seg" isn't working super well from me, and is leading to this being half-complete. Next card will be more of the "best of" style.
Show Opening
Great to have a rundown of each match this time, and that whole segment with Heidi was great. The match she's referencing with Dane was before my time, but the use of visceral imagery makes me want to go back and see what the hell happened, and that's always a good thing when going over personal history. Solid work, and it's a nice twist on the open challenge to have it go unanswered.
Curtis Penn vs. Frank Dylan James
The match itself showed the totally selfish-yet-violent Penn in all his glory, with sprinkled in bits of FDJ's potential for redneck blind rage, and that's great. Angus's commentary was a little off to me, sort of going back and forth between no-selling the competitors and being REALLY EXCITED about it and then snoring again. I think the extremes could just use a little more leveled next time.
Troll Hard
Ty Walker and Jonny Booya were hilarious here, and seeing the fun character work from Jonny in particular made me want to change things I did in the match I wrote later in the card! Just fun stuff.
Poor Francis
Edward White is just coooold here. Keep this going, it makes me really want to know how FDJ can get out of this mess.
Chalk One Up For The Good Guys
Diego de Leon was the star of this one for me, both in humor and in recapping his exploits vs Capital Punishment last card. TexMex Holiday are obviously good buds, and I'm a sucker for "wrestling friends".
Henry Keyes vs. Jonny Booya
I wrote this one so I won't comment, except to say thanks to all y'all who have had positive things to say!
Disrespectful Heathens
The pairing of the "oh you'll DQ if I cheat again? Let me kick this guy square in the nuts while staring at you" Penn alongside the "you see how much I dominated that guy I sent a MESSAGE" Penn is just classic heel work and very well done. Slight miscommunication between us led to my later segment having dialogue that didn't make QUITE as much sense if Dane already booked it, but it's not the end of the world.
More to come as I read it and have time to write long things...
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PositivelyKen
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Oh, is this the thread for explaining why we haven't posted feedback yet? Sweet, I'll go next:
- Bought a new battery for my poor frozen car
- Went grocery shopping
- Watched a DVD
- Prepping to watch another DVD
Maybe someone who didn't leave feedback last time can get things started.
- Bought a new battery for my poor frozen car
- Went grocery shopping
- Watched a DVD
- Prepping to watch another DVD
Maybe someone who didn't leave feedback last time can get things started.
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Going to do this in two parts, one half today and another half tomorrow and will edit this out. All right, I'm gonna give my chance to feed the backs as it were. Play by play style for this show. As a general rule, I’m not going to comment on anything that I wrote.
Show Opening
Good cold open and a good return for Heidi Christenson. Beyond my brief stint here, I can’t say personally that I’m familiar with the character, but this was a good intro for me to get a good grasp of the character. She’s a big deal and wants to fuck somebody up. Like this and with a starting-to-get-stacked top of the card, it’ll be interesting to see where she fits into the grand scheme of things.
Curtis Penn vs. Frank Dylan James
Big fan of this match to not only further the ongoing issue between Penn, Pyre and Keyes, but also putting FDJ over as the beast that he is. Penn has been a fantastic champion knowing when to play chickenshit and badass at the same time which has been real fun to see. Like that Pyre and Keyes have gotten some payback for Penn’s actions and looking forward to see this issue escalate further.
Troll Hard
I laughed my ass of at Jonny Booya dancing with his pecs in the mirror. As I said, interested to see if Heidi comes after the title since Kai Scott seems to be deathly afraid of her. Wacky antics from Ty Walker, who I’ve really been coming to like (and HNB as a whole) as they remind me of DX… in a good way, long-time friends who aren’t too mature to dick around with people. Liking the segments that get multiple stories over (HNB/T-UTs, Scott’s growing paranoia and concern to hang onto his title)
Poor Francis
Damn, cold-blooded stuff from Edward White. One thing I like about the Blood Diamonds is what while the Truly Untouchables have the numbers, BDs are completely ruthless fucks willing to use people to get what they want.
Chalk One Up For The Good Guys
For people that didn’t like the lack of segments last week, this one is for you. I loved every bit of this and Frank Holiday and Diego de Leon are really coming into their own as a result of this partnership. I’ve told Ken and Tone this, but they need to be contractually obligated to be in each other’s segments even if it’s just Diego popping his head in a window to go “Hi, amigo, neighborinos.” In seriousness, this segment did a good job of putting importance on the third and final match-up of the HOSS/TMH series.
Henry Keyes vs. Jonny Booya
Big win here for Henry Keyes, knocking off the heavy of the Truly Untouchables. Normally, I can’t stand the clichéd “play the music to distract the guy” in wrestling, but this worked here and I liked that it didn’t lead to the direct finish. Kudos to the writer as well who mixed the action with the commentary very well.
Disrespectful Heathens
I love a heel’s revisionist history of events around him and the next natural step in the feud to have Pyre and Henry Keyes in action to vie for Curtis Penn. This feud has been very well done, not only building up Penn as a great bastard champion, but taking a couple of new bloods like Pyre and Keyes and helping them fill out the SoHer scene nicely.
I wrote Under Lock and Key and the following match and won’t comment on them directly, but I do want to reiterate it’s been a real blast working together with Anty and Ken in this feud and really glad that people have enjoyed this. Moving on.
ACX HQ
Pete Whealdon has been the perfect third for the ACX and I love these sleazy bastards. I am demanding an ACX/HNB feud/match/segment at some point.
Everyone Wants The Man No One Wants
More buildup between Pyre and Keyes and I like the approaches of both men (Pyre a bit tactical/neutral while Keyes wants to fuck somebody up). Short and to the point. Good stuff.
ACX vs. YAZ/Loeh/Stevens
Get the latter a team name. But in all seriousness, as short as this was, I enjoyed it. As hilarious as the ACX have been, it was great for this to not only be a showcase for what they can really do, but another good trios feud in an already stacked division. I’m hoping to work with both of these teams eventually.
To Be Continued and will edit this other half tomorrow.
Show Opening
Good cold open and a good return for Heidi Christenson. Beyond my brief stint here, I can’t say personally that I’m familiar with the character, but this was a good intro for me to get a good grasp of the character. She’s a big deal and wants to fuck somebody up. Like this and with a starting-to-get-stacked top of the card, it’ll be interesting to see where she fits into the grand scheme of things.
Curtis Penn vs. Frank Dylan James
Big fan of this match to not only further the ongoing issue between Penn, Pyre and Keyes, but also putting FDJ over as the beast that he is. Penn has been a fantastic champion knowing when to play chickenshit and badass at the same time which has been real fun to see. Like that Pyre and Keyes have gotten some payback for Penn’s actions and looking forward to see this issue escalate further.
Troll Hard
I laughed my ass of at Jonny Booya dancing with his pecs in the mirror. As I said, interested to see if Heidi comes after the title since Kai Scott seems to be deathly afraid of her. Wacky antics from Ty Walker, who I’ve really been coming to like (and HNB as a whole) as they remind me of DX… in a good way, long-time friends who aren’t too mature to dick around with people. Liking the segments that get multiple stories over (HNB/T-UTs, Scott’s growing paranoia and concern to hang onto his title)
Poor Francis
Damn, cold-blooded stuff from Edward White. One thing I like about the Blood Diamonds is what while the Truly Untouchables have the numbers, BDs are completely ruthless fucks willing to use people to get what they want.
Chalk One Up For The Good Guys
For people that didn’t like the lack of segments last week, this one is for you. I loved every bit of this and Frank Holiday and Diego de Leon are really coming into their own as a result of this partnership. I’ve told Ken and Tone this, but they need to be contractually obligated to be in each other’s segments even if it’s just Diego popping his head in a window to go “Hi, amigo, neighborinos.” In seriousness, this segment did a good job of putting importance on the third and final match-up of the HOSS/TMH series.
Henry Keyes vs. Jonny Booya
Big win here for Henry Keyes, knocking off the heavy of the Truly Untouchables. Normally, I can’t stand the clichéd “play the music to distract the guy” in wrestling, but this worked here and I liked that it didn’t lead to the direct finish. Kudos to the writer as well who mixed the action with the commentary very well.
Disrespectful Heathens
I love a heel’s revisionist history of events around him and the next natural step in the feud to have Pyre and Henry Keyes in action to vie for Curtis Penn. This feud has been very well done, not only building up Penn as a great bastard champion, but taking a couple of new bloods like Pyre and Keyes and helping them fill out the SoHer scene nicely.
I wrote Under Lock and Key and the following match and won’t comment on them directly, but I do want to reiterate it’s been a real blast working together with Anty and Ken in this feud and really glad that people have enjoyed this. Moving on.
ACX HQ
Pete Whealdon has been the perfect third for the ACX and I love these sleazy bastards. I am demanding an ACX/HNB feud/match/segment at some point.
Everyone Wants The Man No One Wants
More buildup between Pyre and Keyes and I like the approaches of both men (Pyre a bit tactical/neutral while Keyes wants to fuck somebody up). Short and to the point. Good stuff.
ACX vs. YAZ/Loeh/Stevens
Get the latter a team name. But in all seriousness, as short as this was, I enjoyed it. As hilarious as the ACX have been, it was great for this to not only be a showcase for what they can really do, but another good trios feud in an already stacked division. I’m hoping to work with both of these teams eventually.
To Be Continued and will edit this other half tomorrow.
SenorJames
DEFIANT Grandpa
Just what I like to see, the feedback thread has 4 replies right off the bat and none of them contain feedback.
SHOW OPENING
After having time to sleep on this bit, I figure it like this. On one hand, it could have used someone coming out to accept her challenge, even if it didn't lead to a fight right then and there. On the other hand, it makes Heidi out to be the BAMF that she legitimately is. Either way is good in it's own way. Also, yes, the actual opening rundown was much better and I apologize again for the lack of one last week.
SOUTHERN HERITAGE: CURTIS PENN (c) vs FRANK DYLAN JAMES
Dunno, Angus being completely bored with the idea of this match and then becoming FDJ's biggest fanboy is just weird. I would think any match involving FDJ would be right up Angus' alley for two reasons. 1. FDJ is a Hoss, 2. FDJ is a wild brawler, both of which earn you 'street cred' with Angus hah. Anyway, liked the finish, some good old fashion heel don't give a fuckery to keep the belt.
TROLL HARD
This and the other two Troll Hard bits are just my way of doing something silly. Kind of a shout out to Team Danger's past antics with the influence of what Hookers and Blow would do.
POOR FRANCIS
Dag, talk about being a cold hearted bastard, Ed White's got it down pat.
CHALK ONE UP FOR THE GOOD GUYS
w00t TMH promo time! LOL at the haircut joke, good one Ken/Anty. Survivor Series rules, yeah baby! Also did anyone else think of Lance Storm when Diego said this?
HENRY KEYES VS JONNY BOOYA
Henry Keyes in another nifty match. I think I want to see Keyes vs Stratton in a program, the matches that could be crafted with these two would be outstanding. Also CANCER TEASE! MOAR CANSAR!
DISRESPECTFUL HEATHENS
Curtis Penn is very angry and says fuck a lot at the end, I dig it, hah.
UNDER LOCK AND KEY
Them dastardly HOSS bastards.
FRANK HOLIDAY vs ALECZANDER
Ken/Anty/Seth can do no wrong it seems. Another good match and lead in to their big battle coming at the end of the arc, in fact, that might be my only gripe, this should have happened at #8. Then again we get to see what happens at #8 for the final big push between these two teams.
ACX HQ
MOAR ACX CUZ MOAR. These guys remind me of the goofy heels back in the day, always fun to watch or in this case, read.
EVERYONE WANTS THE MAN NO ONE WANTS
The bit about Stockton Pyre's motivation has me intrigued with what Brian has in mind and where it's going.
ACX v LISA/STEVENS/YAZ
SRSB TIME FOR ACX! Awesome. Lisa and friends may be after the TUTs, but they have a nifty rival here in ACX. Digging it. I like that this match didn't give away lots of big spots that can be saved for a bigger match, but mostly that this was ACX getting moar srs.
TROLL HARD WITH A VENGEANCE
Moar Rock and Troll with HNB.
EUGENE GETS FISTED
Eugene just told Boxer what's what, like a BAWS. So cool to see this character coming out of his shell.
CLAIRA ST. SURE vs TROY MATTHEWS
Man, Troy Matthews just getting pwnt week to week nowadays. Claira's bit of promo was solid, but then SETH FUCKING STRATTON ARRIVED TO SAVE THE SHOW FROM BEING A DISASTER! (ahem). Good promo. Uhm, yeah?
DAN RYAN, PHILANTHROPIST
Dan Ryan is one creepy, sinister motherfucker. Well done. Anyone who didn't get a little sad panda inside for Quell is a soulless bastard.
DUSTY GRIFFITH vs STOCKTON PYRE
Thanks to Damien for jumping in at the end, I dragged ass badly for this show on this for some reason.
THE PRINCIPAL's OFFICE
Kai Scott has plans, Eric Dane gives no fucks about plans, DA BAWS can haz his own plans.
TROLL FREE OR TROLL HARD
More Trollin' of one Diane Parker, courtesy of your friends at HNB.
BLOOD DIAMONDS vs EUGENE DEWEY & SAM TURNER JR.
Diamonds vs THE GINGER EXPRESS! Outstanding tag match, lots of old school psychology going on here with Box avoiding Eugene, the Diamonds dismantling STJ, Eugene revving up the crowd before the hot tag. Just a really good main event tag match, well done, sir.
BEST OF THE NIGHT STUFF
MATCH OF THE NIGHT:
Main Event Tag.
HERO OF THE NIGHT:
Eugene Dewey, kid just refuses to back down, refuses to crawl back into pre-Tom Sawyer injury shell, I likes it.
HEEL OF THE NIGHT:
I would say Edward White, but that Dan Ryan bit was spectacular and earns the nod IMO.
SEGMENT OF THE NIGHT:
Dan Ryan seriously stole the show with that bit.
WHAT RULED OF THE NIGHT:
I don't care if it was a little late, by comparison to before the change over, we're on time by leaps and bounds. Also the Heidi return and the CANCER tease.
WHAT SUCKED OF THE NIGHT:
I honestly don't think anything sucked. No OOC nonsense, no bad writing, nothing to bitch about in general, unless most of you bastards don't post feedback. DO YOUR GODDAMN FEEDBACK!
SHOW OPENING
After having time to sleep on this bit, I figure it like this. On one hand, it could have used someone coming out to accept her challenge, even if it didn't lead to a fight right then and there. On the other hand, it makes Heidi out to be the BAMF that she legitimately is. Either way is good in it's own way. Also, yes, the actual opening rundown was much better and I apologize again for the lack of one last week.
SOUTHERN HERITAGE: CURTIS PENN (c) vs FRANK DYLAN JAMES
Dunno, Angus being completely bored with the idea of this match and then becoming FDJ's biggest fanboy is just weird. I would think any match involving FDJ would be right up Angus' alley for two reasons. 1. FDJ is a Hoss, 2. FDJ is a wild brawler, both of which earn you 'street cred' with Angus hah. Anyway, liked the finish, some good old fashion heel don't give a fuckery to keep the belt.
TROLL HARD
This and the other two Troll Hard bits are just my way of doing something silly. Kind of a shout out to Team Danger's past antics with the influence of what Hookers and Blow would do.
POOR FRANCIS
Dag, talk about being a cold hearted bastard, Ed White's got it down pat.
CHALK ONE UP FOR THE GOOD GUYS
w00t TMH promo time! LOL at the haircut joke, good one Ken/Anty. Survivor Series rules, yeah baby! Also did anyone else think of Lance Storm when Diego said this?
HENRY KEYES VS JONNY BOOYA
Henry Keyes in another nifty match. I think I want to see Keyes vs Stratton in a program, the matches that could be crafted with these two would be outstanding. Also CANCER TEASE! MOAR CANSAR!
DISRESPECTFUL HEATHENS
Curtis Penn is very angry and says fuck a lot at the end, I dig it, hah.
UNDER LOCK AND KEY
Them dastardly HOSS bastards.
FRANK HOLIDAY vs ALECZANDER
Ken/Anty/Seth can do no wrong it seems. Another good match and lead in to their big battle coming at the end of the arc, in fact, that might be my only gripe, this should have happened at #8. Then again we get to see what happens at #8 for the final big push between these two teams.
ACX HQ
MOAR ACX CUZ MOAR. These guys remind me of the goofy heels back in the day, always fun to watch or in this case, read.
EVERYONE WANTS THE MAN NO ONE WANTS
The bit about Stockton Pyre's motivation has me intrigued with what Brian has in mind and where it's going.
ACX v LISA/STEVENS/YAZ
SRSB TIME FOR ACX! Awesome. Lisa and friends may be after the TUTs, but they have a nifty rival here in ACX. Digging it. I like that this match didn't give away lots of big spots that can be saved for a bigger match, but mostly that this was ACX getting moar srs.
TROLL HARD WITH A VENGEANCE
Moar Rock and Troll with HNB.
EUGENE GETS FISTED
Eugene just told Boxer what's what, like a BAWS. So cool to see this character coming out of his shell.
CLAIRA ST. SURE vs TROY MATTHEWS
Man, Troy Matthews just getting pwnt week to week nowadays. Claira's bit of promo was solid, but then SETH FUCKING STRATTON ARRIVED TO SAVE THE SHOW FROM BEING A DISASTER! (ahem). Good promo. Uhm, yeah?
DAN RYAN, PHILANTHROPIST
Dan Ryan is one creepy, sinister motherfucker. Well done. Anyone who didn't get a little sad panda inside for Quell is a soulless bastard.
DUSTY GRIFFITH vs STOCKTON PYRE
Thanks to Damien for jumping in at the end, I dragged ass badly for this show on this for some reason.
THE PRINCIPAL's OFFICE
Kai Scott has plans, Eric Dane gives no fucks about plans, DA BAWS can haz his own plans.
TROLL FREE OR TROLL HARD
More Trollin' of one Diane Parker, courtesy of your friends at HNB.
BLOOD DIAMONDS vs EUGENE DEWEY & SAM TURNER JR.
Diamonds vs THE GINGER EXPRESS! Outstanding tag match, lots of old school psychology going on here with Box avoiding Eugene, the Diamonds dismantling STJ, Eugene revving up the crowd before the hot tag. Just a really good main event tag match, well done, sir.
BEST OF THE NIGHT STUFF
MATCH OF THE NIGHT:
Main Event Tag.
HERO OF THE NIGHT:
Eugene Dewey, kid just refuses to back down, refuses to crawl back into pre-Tom Sawyer injury shell, I likes it.
HEEL OF THE NIGHT:
I would say Edward White, but that Dan Ryan bit was spectacular and earns the nod IMO.
SEGMENT OF THE NIGHT:
Dan Ryan seriously stole the show with that bit.
WHAT RULED OF THE NIGHT:
I don't care if it was a little late, by comparison to before the change over, we're on time by leaps and bounds. Also the Heidi return and the CANCER tease.
WHAT SUCKED OF THE NIGHT:
I honestly don't think anything sucked. No OOC nonsense, no bad writing, nothing to bitch about in general, unless most of you bastards don't post feedback. DO YOUR GODDAMN FEEDBACK!
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SHOW OPENING
Now I was a bit unclear as to who was going to show up, Heidi or Jeff, but I was happy to see Heidi and hear her thoughts about what has happened since Def 2.0. She’s a crazy bitch and I love her.
SOUTHERN HERITAGE: CURTIS PENN (c) vs FRANK DYLAN JAMES
This is the first match that I’ve written since WCWA. So comments would be appreciated.
TROLL HARD
Grape Faygo, then licks it off of Diane’s face. Ty Walker was truly the star of Team Danger!
POOR FRANCIS
The more and more I read Ed White the more and more I kick myself in the balls about not giving him a chance in WCWA. Hindsight… and I’m sorry.
CHALK ONE UP FOR THE GOOD GUYS
The haircut line was good if not great about how the rest of the team played to the fact they couldn’t tell that he cut his hair because of the mask… It’s more aerodynamic.
HENRY KEYES VS JONNY BOOYA
Keyes gets a much needed win to push our angle along. And the Cancer music was an awesome way to set up that victory.
DISRESPECTFUL HEATHENS
Again just furthering Penn as a heel.
UNDER LOCK AND KEY
Great heel tactics by shoving the guy in the locker, but I think they might have been drawing on some early childhood trauma for that segment. Great seg.
FRANK HOLIDAY vs ALECZANDER
Why is it that when I picture Aleczander in my mind I get a picture of Rob Terry from TNA? Even though they placed poor Jimmy in a locker, thought that they had the match won via count out, then had to face Frank instead of Jimmy and it looked like a sure win, the Heels finally got their comeuppance. Good solid flow for the match and the story. And then you killed Diego with a triple powerbomb which only furthers the freaking angle!
You three gents put together a hell of an arc so far.
ACX HQ
My three favorite degenerates. Now the only thing that could make them greater was to invite cVc into the fold and I would really stop reading because the four of them, a camera, and whatever Cranks brings with him would make me blush and I can’t be reading perverted nasty shit like that, I’m trying to make it into heaven.
EVERYONE WANTS THE MAN NO ONE WANTS
Henry and Stockon really showed what each one was about in this promo. Both are not your cookie cutter baby faces and the idea that Henry Keyes is a facey Box is pretty good.
ACX v LISA/STEVENS/YAZ
Navarro:
Watch the hair, Rich!
Mahogany:
She asked me to!
Line of the fucking night!
TROLL HARD WITH A VENGEANCE
Laughed so hard.
EUGENE GETS FISTED
I have to agree that watching Eugene grow up and finally drop his nuts is great. I still love the nerdy aspect to him. I think he hung out with ACX one night and they finally got the kid laid.
CLAIRA ST. SURE vs TROY MATTHEWS
The match was well written. It furthered CSS story and placed her in contendership for the FIST. And also Stratton who was apparently high or balls deep into an Amsterdam whore… perhaps both. Either way those two looking to take the FIST one way or another.
DAN RYAN, PHILANTHROPIST
You see I like things that pull out emotions for me, Dan Ryan did this for me. Because right at this moment I would like to curb stomp the character. What the character did is vile, downright nasty. Why can’t I think of shit like that?
DUSTY GRIFFITH vs STOCKTON PYRE
It is my personal opinion that Stockton Pyre and Dusty Griffith should always shake the hands of their opponents. They are after all babyfaces and it would just seem right.
Ok, I wasn’t a fan of Alceo when I first started, what can I say other than I’m slightly behind the curve of everyone here, but now I look forward to Alceo and the LBC every show. I still think of him as Joe Pesci, because he seems like a guy who can get things done.
THE PRINCIPAL's OFFICE
This reminds me of my youth.
Me: Mom I wanna sleep in.
Mom: No. You’re going to get up
Me:Well I want to lay around the house.
Mom: I don’t give a fuck you’re cutting the grass…
I stumble out in the fucking summer heat to push mow a 2 acre yard with no trees.
TROLL FREE OR TROLL HARD
I keep wondering if Ty is going to land him a white girl.
BLOOD DIAMONDS vs EUGENE DEWEY & SAM TURNER JR.
There are times in which I cannot read a tag team match because of all the moving parts or that only one of the tag team is featured more than the other, but this match takes all four of the individuals and makes them their own star.
So it seems that this match was set up just to place Eugene up 2- 0 on Box, 3-0 if you count this tag match if I’m not mistaken, and now Box’s pride is on the line. Thank God because Box would have Killed Eugene if it wasn’t for that pride. So now we get Box and Eugene in a steel cage… I see blood, much blood.
Now I was a bit unclear as to who was going to show up, Heidi or Jeff, but I was happy to see Heidi and hear her thoughts about what has happened since Def 2.0. She’s a crazy bitch and I love her.
SOUTHERN HERITAGE: CURTIS PENN (c) vs FRANK DYLAN JAMES
This is the first match that I’ve written since WCWA. So comments would be appreciated.
TROLL HARD
Grape Faygo, then licks it off of Diane’s face. Ty Walker was truly the star of Team Danger!
POOR FRANCIS
The more and more I read Ed White the more and more I kick myself in the balls about not giving him a chance in WCWA. Hindsight… and I’m sorry.
CHALK ONE UP FOR THE GOOD GUYS
The haircut line was good if not great about how the rest of the team played to the fact they couldn’t tell that he cut his hair because of the mask… It’s more aerodynamic.
HENRY KEYES VS JONNY BOOYA
Keyes gets a much needed win to push our angle along. And the Cancer music was an awesome way to set up that victory.
DISRESPECTFUL HEATHENS
Again just furthering Penn as a heel.
UNDER LOCK AND KEY
Great heel tactics by shoving the guy in the locker, but I think they might have been drawing on some early childhood trauma for that segment. Great seg.
FRANK HOLIDAY vs ALECZANDER
Why is it that when I picture Aleczander in my mind I get a picture of Rob Terry from TNA? Even though they placed poor Jimmy in a locker, thought that they had the match won via count out, then had to face Frank instead of Jimmy and it looked like a sure win, the Heels finally got their comeuppance. Good solid flow for the match and the story. And then you killed Diego with a triple powerbomb which only furthers the freaking angle!
You three gents put together a hell of an arc so far.
ACX HQ
My three favorite degenerates. Now the only thing that could make them greater was to invite cVc into the fold and I would really stop reading because the four of them, a camera, and whatever Cranks brings with him would make me blush and I can’t be reading perverted nasty shit like that, I’m trying to make it into heaven.
EVERYONE WANTS THE MAN NO ONE WANTS
Henry and Stockon really showed what each one was about in this promo. Both are not your cookie cutter baby faces and the idea that Henry Keyes is a facey Box is pretty good.
ACX v LISA/STEVENS/YAZ
Navarro:
Watch the hair, Rich!
Mahogany:
She asked me to!
Line of the fucking night!
TROLL HARD WITH A VENGEANCE
Laughed so hard.
EUGENE GETS FISTED
I have to agree that watching Eugene grow up and finally drop his nuts is great. I still love the nerdy aspect to him. I think he hung out with ACX one night and they finally got the kid laid.
CLAIRA ST. SURE vs TROY MATTHEWS
The match was well written. It furthered CSS story and placed her in contendership for the FIST. And also Stratton who was apparently high or balls deep into an Amsterdam whore… perhaps both. Either way those two looking to take the FIST one way or another.
DAN RYAN, PHILANTHROPIST
You see I like things that pull out emotions for me, Dan Ryan did this for me. Because right at this moment I would like to curb stomp the character. What the character did is vile, downright nasty. Why can’t I think of shit like that?
DUSTY GRIFFITH vs STOCKTON PYRE
It is my personal opinion that Stockton Pyre and Dusty Griffith should always shake the hands of their opponents. They are after all babyfaces and it would just seem right.
Ok, I wasn’t a fan of Alceo when I first started, what can I say other than I’m slightly behind the curve of everyone here, but now I look forward to Alceo and the LBC every show. I still think of him as Joe Pesci, because he seems like a guy who can get things done.
THE PRINCIPAL's OFFICE
This reminds me of my youth.
Me: Mom I wanna sleep in.
Mom: No. You’re going to get up
Me:Well I want to lay around the house.
Mom: I don’t give a fuck you’re cutting the grass…
I stumble out in the fucking summer heat to push mow a 2 acre yard with no trees.
TROLL FREE OR TROLL HARD
I keep wondering if Ty is going to land him a white girl.
BLOOD DIAMONDS vs EUGENE DEWEY & SAM TURNER JR.
There are times in which I cannot read a tag team match because of all the moving parts or that only one of the tag team is featured more than the other, but this match takes all four of the individuals and makes them their own star.
So it seems that this match was set up just to place Eugene up 2- 0 on Box, 3-0 if you count this tag match if I’m not mistaken, and now Box’s pride is on the line. Thank God because Box would have Killed Eugene if it wasn’t for that pride. So now we get Box and Eugene in a steel cage… I see blood, much blood.
Damien
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Less excuses, more feedback.
Opening
Great to see Heidi back, and the fact that she’s back with a lid on her temper is a nice touch, but I really hope it doesn’t last too long. Heidi is fantastic as an absolute bitch and that I for one would miss that if it was gone for too long. Other than that, I wish someone had come out, not necessarily to answer Heidi’s challenge, but more to ‘welcome’ her back verbally.
Penn vs. FDJ
A decent match, and I can definitely see what the idea was behind it, but I wish that Pyre and Keyes could have played a bigger role. Everything involving them seemed a bit rushed and it all happened way too early for my liking. I feel like there should have been more of a match before Penn tried to run, and I definitely feel that Pyre and Keyes shouldn’t have just turned up in one passage of action, and then disappeared in the next, never to be mentioned again.
Troll Hard]
Not sure if Kai is scared of Heidi or Kai is just being smart… or a combination of the two… Also some decent comedy here. I expelled air through my nose quickly at the can can pec dance and the double entendres. Kudos.
Poor Francis
I really, really like this segment. Edward White doesn’t seem to get the chance to make threats these days (Unless my memory is fucking with me) so it’s nice to see him running something, rather than doing it with Box. Everything felt natural here as well. Nothing was over the top, nothing was unnecessary. Really good.
Chalk One Up For The Good Guys
The match between Aleczander and Rix is one that I’m actually looking forward to because it’s one that I have no idea how it’s going to go. And lets be honest, the aim of this is for us to want to read what’s next. These guys are doing their jobs perfectly. Great work fellas.
Keyes vs. Booya
A big win for Keyes, but it needs to be carried forwards. Don’t let his steam (haha) run out. Keep him hot. Keyes really does seem like a good fit for DEF, and I’d like to see him succeed. On the match side itself, very nice. There were times when I though Keebs and Angus were talking to much, but that’s very minor. More good work.
Disrespectful Heathens
Simple, to the point. No complaints about this one, but there’s really not much to say either other than that it’s a decent set up to next week.
Under Lock And Key
Nice to see them HOSS boys being dicks before the match. It just wouldn’t have been right if they’d left things alone to be settled in the ring all fair like. More hype for one of my most anticipated matches on this card, and it’s all good.
Rix vs. Aleczander
A good twist and a good match. I was expecting Rix to come in during the match and cause a distraction (maybe taking out Keeling who was on the apron or something) which would lead to the finish, but it’s good to not go the obvious way.
If there’s one match I’m looking forward to most on the Germany show right now, it’s this one.
ACX HQ
Love ‘em. Can’t wait to see what they’re gonna do with Lisa in the ring. I can’t help but think so many wrong things.
Everyone Wants The Man No One Wants
I thought Penn already went to Dane and got that match set up? And now Keyes and Pyre have organised it themselves? I guess that’s a little bit of miscommunication unless I’m reading it wrong.
Other than that, Keyes and Pyre are establishing themselves fast in DEF, and I’m really happy about it. Also, the little things Keyes does, like the romanesque handshake, are such nice touches. Really fleshes out the character and sets him apart.
ACX vs. LYS
Get LYS a name. Any name. Please.
This was the total polar opposite from what I was expecting. I was expecting a throwaway comedy match to give LYS a win and ACX an excuse to grope a pretty girl. Instead we got an actual match with no result.
It’s good to see ACX take things more seriously, otherwise they’re going to end up just being 3MB. It’s also good to see some character from Roger Stevens, who I’m totally unfamiliar with.
Troll Hard With A Vengeance
Did I miss Troll Hard 2: Troll Harder? Well, never mind. This made up for it. More gold from HnB.
Eugene Gets Fisted
It took us a while to decide what to do with this seg, having changed plans a couple of times, but I think we made it work.
Claira St. Sure vs. Troy Matthews
It’s good to see Claira stretch her wings a bit, lord knows she needs to right now.
And it’s great to see Seth Stratton back after his one show hiatus. I fuckin’ love Seth, and would really want to see this match.
Dan Ryan, Philantropist
Damn Brunk… that shit’s cold.
Dusty Griffith vs. Stockton Pyre
I had a hand in this, so I’ll withhold comments.
The Principal's Office
I want someone to kick Kai Scott’s inactive ass. I get to see Heidi kick Kai Scott’s inactive ass. I can’t wait.
[Troll Free Or Troll Hard[/b]
Damn son, Diane has been fucked with all night. I can’t help but feel this should have ended differently though, maybe with TUT attacking HNB so that the whole night wasn’t so one sided.
Blood Diamonds vs. Eugene and Sam
I wrote this.
Opening
Great to see Heidi back, and the fact that she’s back with a lid on her temper is a nice touch, but I really hope it doesn’t last too long. Heidi is fantastic as an absolute bitch and that I for one would miss that if it was gone for too long. Other than that, I wish someone had come out, not necessarily to answer Heidi’s challenge, but more to ‘welcome’ her back verbally.
Penn vs. FDJ
A decent match, and I can definitely see what the idea was behind it, but I wish that Pyre and Keyes could have played a bigger role. Everything involving them seemed a bit rushed and it all happened way too early for my liking. I feel like there should have been more of a match before Penn tried to run, and I definitely feel that Pyre and Keyes shouldn’t have just turned up in one passage of action, and then disappeared in the next, never to be mentioned again.
Troll Hard]
Not sure if Kai is scared of Heidi or Kai is just being smart… or a combination of the two… Also some decent comedy here. I expelled air through my nose quickly at the can can pec dance and the double entendres. Kudos.
Poor Francis
I really, really like this segment. Edward White doesn’t seem to get the chance to make threats these days (Unless my memory is fucking with me) so it’s nice to see him running something, rather than doing it with Box. Everything felt natural here as well. Nothing was over the top, nothing was unnecessary. Really good.
Chalk One Up For The Good Guys
The match between Aleczander and Rix is one that I’m actually looking forward to because it’s one that I have no idea how it’s going to go. And lets be honest, the aim of this is for us to want to read what’s next. These guys are doing their jobs perfectly. Great work fellas.
Keyes vs. Booya
A big win for Keyes, but it needs to be carried forwards. Don’t let his steam (haha) run out. Keep him hot. Keyes really does seem like a good fit for DEF, and I’d like to see him succeed. On the match side itself, very nice. There were times when I though Keebs and Angus were talking to much, but that’s very minor. More good work.
Disrespectful Heathens
Simple, to the point. No complaints about this one, but there’s really not much to say either other than that it’s a decent set up to next week.
Under Lock And Key
Nice to see them HOSS boys being dicks before the match. It just wouldn’t have been right if they’d left things alone to be settled in the ring all fair like. More hype for one of my most anticipated matches on this card, and it’s all good.
Rix vs. Aleczander
A good twist and a good match. I was expecting Rix to come in during the match and cause a distraction (maybe taking out Keeling who was on the apron or something) which would lead to the finish, but it’s good to not go the obvious way.
If there’s one match I’m looking forward to most on the Germany show right now, it’s this one.
ACX HQ
Love ‘em. Can’t wait to see what they’re gonna do with Lisa in the ring. I can’t help but think so many wrong things.
Everyone Wants The Man No One Wants
I thought Penn already went to Dane and got that match set up? And now Keyes and Pyre have organised it themselves? I guess that’s a little bit of miscommunication unless I’m reading it wrong.
Other than that, Keyes and Pyre are establishing themselves fast in DEF, and I’m really happy about it. Also, the little things Keyes does, like the romanesque handshake, are such nice touches. Really fleshes out the character and sets him apart.
ACX vs. LYS
Get LYS a name. Any name. Please.
This was the total polar opposite from what I was expecting. I was expecting a throwaway comedy match to give LYS a win and ACX an excuse to grope a pretty girl. Instead we got an actual match with no result.
It’s good to see ACX take things more seriously, otherwise they’re going to end up just being 3MB. It’s also good to see some character from Roger Stevens, who I’m totally unfamiliar with.
Troll Hard With A Vengeance
Did I miss Troll Hard 2: Troll Harder? Well, never mind. This made up for it. More gold from HnB.
Eugene Gets Fisted
It took us a while to decide what to do with this seg, having changed plans a couple of times, but I think we made it work.
Claira St. Sure vs. Troy Matthews
It’s good to see Claira stretch her wings a bit, lord knows she needs to right now.
And it’s great to see Seth Stratton back after his one show hiatus. I fuckin’ love Seth, and would really want to see this match.
Dan Ryan, Philantropist
Damn Brunk… that shit’s cold.
Dusty Griffith vs. Stockton Pyre
I had a hand in this, so I’ll withhold comments.
The Principal's Office
I want someone to kick Kai Scott’s inactive ass. I get to see Heidi kick Kai Scott’s inactive ass. I can’t wait.
[Troll Free Or Troll Hard[/b]
Damn son, Diane has been fucked with all night. I can’t help but feel this should have ended differently though, maybe with TUT attacking HNB so that the whole night wasn’t so one sided.
Blood Diamonds vs. Eugene and Sam
I wrote this.
Evan H.
DEF Director of Fun & Good Humor
FDJ v. Penn - Solid match, Penn is dynamite.
Poor Francis - I'm having a ball writing Ed. William, if you're out there I hope I'm doing him justice bud.
Chalk One Up For The Good Guys - Can't state enough how much I appreciate the character work here between you guys. Excellent stuff.
Keyes v. Booya - Very cute, love the Cancer tease. Classic booking.
Disrespectful Heathens - Again, Penn is killin' it lately.
ACX HQ - Wow I'm glad everyone liked that seg, lol I love just old school promo segments. We don't have enough in my opinion, that's why I try and do one for ACX each card their booked.
Everyone Wants the Man No One Wants - Love the interplay between Pyre and Keyes. Pyre is just so odd, lovin' this character so far.
Angel City eXpress vs Lisa/YAZ/Stevens - Fun little match, I really appreciate ACX getting written so strong. At some point I'd love to focus on Don and the boys at some point. I'm having a ton of fun writing for them.
Eugene Gets FISTED - 98% Damien. <3 you my boy, top notch.
Dan Ryan, Philanthropist - Godlike. Response from Bronson forthcoming.
Dusty Griffith vs Stockton Pyre - I love watching a plan come together...
The Principal's Office - Short, to the point. We need more segs like this. Shorter backstage stuff, promos, etc. Helps tremendously to break up the action.
Main Event - Bravo Damien sir. Well done.
Poor Francis - I'm having a ball writing Ed. William, if you're out there I hope I'm doing him justice bud.
Chalk One Up For The Good Guys - Can't state enough how much I appreciate the character work here between you guys. Excellent stuff.
Keyes v. Booya - Very cute, love the Cancer tease. Classic booking.
Disrespectful Heathens - Again, Penn is killin' it lately.
ACX HQ - Wow I'm glad everyone liked that seg, lol I love just old school promo segments. We don't have enough in my opinion, that's why I try and do one for ACX each card their booked.
Everyone Wants the Man No One Wants - Love the interplay between Pyre and Keyes. Pyre is just so odd, lovin' this character so far.
Angel City eXpress vs Lisa/YAZ/Stevens - Fun little match, I really appreciate ACX getting written so strong. At some point I'd love to focus on Don and the boys at some point. I'm having a ton of fun writing for them.
Eugene Gets FISTED - 98% Damien. <3 you my boy, top notch.
Dan Ryan, Philanthropist - Godlike. Response from Bronson forthcoming.
Dusty Griffith vs Stockton Pyre - I love watching a plan come together...
The Principal's Office - Short, to the point. We need more segs like this. Shorter backstage stuff, promos, etc. Helps tremendously to break up the action.
Main Event - Bravo Damien sir. Well done.
Bad Mofo
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Match of the Night: Main Event.
Segment of the Night: Dan Ryan's or Heidi's segment. Had I been Diego on the show for either of those segments, I would've had to have been restrained from beating the both of them within inches of their lives. So those segments did their jobs.
Babyface of the Night: Ty Walker.
Heel(s) of the Night: Boxer, but I really really liked Penn and I also liked Edward White.
MVP of the Night (IC): Ty Walker and HNB. I also enjoyed the Die Hard references.
What Ruled? The segments this card.
What Sucked? Angus' reactions to some characters. I think we should make it a clear cut rule that unless you're fucking with TD and CCJ - he doesn't hate you if you're a heel. We should be using DDK to sell the heels heinous actions more in my opinion, or to question it while Angus weasles out of it.
Whatever Else You Can Think Of: Splash.
Segment of the Night: Dan Ryan's or Heidi's segment. Had I been Diego on the show for either of those segments, I would've had to have been restrained from beating the both of them within inches of their lives. So those segments did their jobs.
Babyface of the Night: Ty Walker.
Heel(s) of the Night: Boxer, but I really really liked Penn and I also liked Edward White.
MVP of the Night (IC): Ty Walker and HNB. I also enjoyed the Die Hard references.
What Ruled? The segments this card.
What Sucked? Angus' reactions to some characters. I think we should make it a clear cut rule that unless you're fucking with TD and CCJ - he doesn't hate you if you're a heel. We should be using DDK to sell the heels heinous actions more in my opinion, or to question it while Angus weasles out of it.
Whatever Else You Can Think Of: Splash.
RyanMatthews
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Match of the Night: Main Event. - First off it was good to see Eugene and STJ in the main event. I think different guys/ladies in that spot are always a good thing. And the build of Eugene in particular is a sight to see.
Segment of the Night: Dan Ryan's Honestly, I have very rarely seen a more assholian move than the one Dan pulled in that seg with Virginia. Well played sir.
Babyface of the Night: Hookers and Blow (How can you not appreciate us.
Heel(s) of the Night: Penn has to take this one, the traditional don't lose your title by way of DQ, never played better. Though back to the seg with Ryan, that makes him come in a close second.
MVP of the Night (IC): I gotta give this one to Heidi. Lead by example, and it got started with a bang for sure.
What Ruled? The segments this card. (couldn't have said it better.)
What Sucked? It does seem to me that we need to have a more standardized approach to the commentating. What I mean to say is that Angus needs to decide what side of the fucking fence he's on and stick to it across the board. No changing up shit from one match to the other. Either Angus is the heel or DDK (within reason) is.
Whatever Else You Can Think Of: To the person who said that TUT should have gotten some offense in on HNB, first, I point you to the end of the Walker-Scott match where Ty got his face torn open. Second, they will be getting theirs, patience, comrade.
Segment of the Night: Dan Ryan's Honestly, I have very rarely seen a more assholian move than the one Dan pulled in that seg with Virginia. Well played sir.
Babyface of the Night: Hookers and Blow (How can you not appreciate us.
Heel(s) of the Night: Penn has to take this one, the traditional don't lose your title by way of DQ, never played better. Though back to the seg with Ryan, that makes him come in a close second.
MVP of the Night (IC): I gotta give this one to Heidi. Lead by example, and it got started with a bang for sure.
What Ruled? The segments this card. (couldn't have said it better.)
What Sucked? It does seem to me that we need to have a more standardized approach to the commentating. What I mean to say is that Angus needs to decide what side of the fucking fence he's on and stick to it across the board. No changing up shit from one match to the other. Either Angus is the heel or DDK (within reason) is.
Whatever Else You Can Think Of: To the person who said that TUT should have gotten some offense in on HNB, first, I point you to the end of the Walker-Scott match where Ty got his face torn open. Second, they will be getting theirs, patience, comrade.
BigPimpin
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MotN: Main Event, well-written for sure.
Segment of the night: Toss up between Dan Ryan and Heidi. There's going to be some work needed to get the rep back for Heidi, as the segment seems to portend. But Dan's was just...*shudders*
Face of the Night: I love the HnB segs, but to me Face of the Night would be Eugene.
Heel of the Night: Fuck me, I don't know, we have too much quality. I'll recognize HOSS for their hard work fucking with their opponents.
Night MVP: Box and associations carried the upper-half of this show, from the ME to the FIST contendership to the Quell segment, I'll give him the nod here.
Ruled? Segs I guess, I mean I liked most of it.
Sucked? Same thing everyone's complaining about, Angus' inconsistency. This is why match-writer aids are a must.
Else? Props to Brusch, who covered my slacker ass when shit got real. I'm hoping to keep up this show around.
Segment of the night: Toss up between Dan Ryan and Heidi. There's going to be some work needed to get the rep back for Heidi, as the segment seems to portend. But Dan's was just...*shudders*
Face of the Night: I love the HnB segs, but to me Face of the Night would be Eugene.
Heel of the Night: Fuck me, I don't know, we have too much quality. I'll recognize HOSS for their hard work fucking with their opponents.
Night MVP: Box and associations carried the upper-half of this show, from the ME to the FIST contendership to the Quell segment, I'll give him the nod here.
Ruled? Segs I guess, I mean I liked most of it.
Sucked? Same thing everyone's complaining about, Angus' inconsistency. This is why match-writer aids are a must.
Else? Props to Brusch, who covered my slacker ass when shit got real. I'm hoping to keep up this show around.
Lee R.
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Match of the Night:
Honestly, none of the matches were super-spectacular, although since this wasn't a PPV and we didn't have any title matches that's excusable. The main event was fine, and the trios match was a lot of fun.
Segment of the Night:
As much as I love everything Heidi says and does, you just can't get better than Dan Ryan at the hospital. This is how you be a shockingly evil "horrible person IRL" type heel. For serious.
Babyface of the Night:
Eugene Dewey.
Heel of the Night:
Dan Ryan
MVP of the Night (IC):
Brunk, with Renee a very close second. Those two promos were the high point of this show.
What Ruled?
Almost everything.
What Sucked?
ACX doing their trash talking segment and getting confused about which team they were wrestling.
Whatever Else You Can Think Of:
Co-writing the "Go to the Principal's" seg with Justin was awesome. Before we started, he said something like "We have to figure out how to have this seg not devolve into heel dickwaving," and so I came up with the idea of Scott being scared, and it just went from there and turned out perfectly.
Honestly, none of the matches were super-spectacular, although since this wasn't a PPV and we didn't have any title matches that's excusable. The main event was fine, and the trios match was a lot of fun.
Segment of the Night:
As much as I love everything Heidi says and does, you just can't get better than Dan Ryan at the hospital. This is how you be a shockingly evil "horrible person IRL" type heel. For serious.
Babyface of the Night:
Eugene Dewey.
Heel of the Night:
Dan Ryan
MVP of the Night (IC):
Brunk, with Renee a very close second. Those two promos were the high point of this show.
What Ruled?
Almost everything.
What Sucked?
ACX doing their trash talking segment and getting confused about which team they were wrestling.
Whatever Else You Can Think Of:
Co-writing the "Go to the Principal's" seg with Justin was awesome. Before we started, he said something like "We have to figure out how to have this seg not devolve into heel dickwaving," and so I came up with the idea of Scott being scared, and it just went from there and turned out perfectly.
Evan H.
DEF Director of Fun & Good Humor
How exactly was I confused about what team they were facing there captain passive aggressive?
Lee R.
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ACX was wrestling the team of Lisa Loeh/Roger Stevens/Yoshikazu YAZ. Lisa Loeh worked for Kai Scott for a few weeks, neither Stevens nor YAZ ever did. Stevens was in Cascadia, neither Lisa nor YAZ were. YAZ was in Old Line, neither Lisa nor Stevens was.
Given the fact that the line didn't fit that team in the slightest, I thought you got confused and thought they were wrestling the Truly Untouchables - who the joke would have fit had you made it at them. Since everyone in the Truly Untouchables is a friend of Kai Scott and Scott, Booya, Maddox, and CSS worked in Old Line.
My suggestion, and I can't think of a non-snarky way to say it, is that since you weren't in Old Line and don't really know anything about it, stop trying to namedrop OLW for heel heat. Alternately, if you want to namedrop for authenticity's sake you could ask me, or preferably Jeff, because we remember what happened.
Evan H.
DEF Director of Fun & Good Humor
Well at least now I know the reason you don't like me or my stuff is because I wasn't in the same fed as you "back in the day", because that's a reason.
Lisa = worked for Kai
YAZ = was in Old Line Wrestling
Stevens = Was in WC:C
Sorry I quickly gleaned info from your bios to have something to say in a segment (something we're lacking on every show) for my secondary character. In addition to the other angle and a half I'm helping produce.
Lick my balls, dude.
Lisa = worked for Kai
YAZ = was in Old Line Wrestling
Stevens = Was in WC:C
Sorry I quickly gleaned info from your bios to have something to say in a segment (something we're lacking on every show) for my secondary character. In addition to the other angle and a half I'm helping produce.
Lick my balls, dude.
Alright, I've grown bored.
You two either kiss and make up, learn to avoid each other, or kick rocks.
I thought we were grown ass men, the fuck is this high school bullshit? Grow the fuck up. The both of you.
You two either kiss and make up, learn to avoid each other, or kick rocks.
I thought we were grown ass men, the fuck is this high school bullshit? Grow the fuck up. The both of you.
Jonathan Todd
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I kicked a rock once....
I stubbed my toe.
-Jonathan the thread killer.
I stubbed my toe.
-Jonathan the thread killer.