Alright, alright, enough of these posts that have nothing to do with feedback...
AT FULL STRENGTH
Cutting to the chase, I dig it… lulz at the Lindsay’s Hole spot in the commentary… BRAWL-O-RAMA AT THE RASSLEPLAX!... Good stuff, looking forward to the Executive Decision match, should be awesome sauce.
TONY DAVIS vs CAPITAL PUNISHMENT
Turtle-Raper, hah… Ewww, dat ice cream sammich… Done pissed Cap off, time to put the hurting on Mr. Davis… BABYFACECOMEBACK!... Classic Heel Manager shenanigans… Out of nowhere finish as the clusterfuck rages on the outside, good stuff.
TIL THE TRUTH STARTS FALLIN OUT
Me and Justin wrote this.
WHITEWOOD’s WEB
Hah, Hogskin… Dante out to be all smarmy… Sooo awkward when the fans don’t pop for you… HAAAAAAH, Teddy Ruxpin!... Of course wrestling fans would start to get into something like this, life imitating art and so on and so forth in DEFIANCE.
SKYBREAKERS vs BLOOD DIAMONDS
Chris, Rob and myself wrote this.
WRONG PLACE, WRONG TIME
Once Junior and HOSS show up, this thing veers away from the Dawson’s Party of Five at the Creek vibe of the Noble / MLM stuff. I don’t have anything against it, but I do hope this leads to something that pushes Noble forward, otherwise, it’s something that I feel is better suited as a roleplay and not some throwaway material to setup a heel’s interruption, since this didn’t lead to a match involving Noble… And yes, there’s a reason things are cliches, because they work.
ERIC DANE vs FRANK DYLAN JAMES
This is how Eff Dee Jay gets to the bottom of things… With civil conversation… Using his fists… With normal human beings, it makes no sense whatsoever, but in FDJ’s world, it’s the most sensical thing ever.
PENN & DEWEY: PAPERVIEW STIP REVEAL!
Curtis Penn is never off point when he’s talking, good work Jon, you seem to be hitting the mark every time out… And Euge comes out swinging with the mic work, very good spot there where Euge clues Penn in about being able to pummel him into submission, and Penn’s reaction is spot on… Good stuff, guys, this whole arc has been real strong for Euge and Penn.
YOU DISAPPOINT ME
Dan Ryan gunna Dan Ryan all over your face, poor Troy… Gotta wonder though, where were Ty and Jake when this happened? Jake was probably signing autographs to get over his disappointment, Ty was probably rambleranting at White to make the match with the Sons.
ONE HELLUVA CONVERSATION
I wrote this.
TEAM HOLIDAY vs TEAM PYRE
Some real nifty teams there, should be good… The plot thickens here with the constant friction between Noble and Keyes… And Frank playing Ricky Morton in this match is weird, probably should have been Rich, with his wanting to tag in a little later and he gets his heat with Pyre, then it goes sideways on him… Actually, even having LT play Ricky Morton makes sense because of the earlier brawl, but it’s all good so far, just me being nitpicky is all… Though as I continue reading this, Frank playing BFIP (babyface in peril) makes sense because of his issues with Pyre and Noble, soooo, yeah… Angus with the inappropriate commentary regarding LT, so, absolute gold, natch… Other nitpicky comment, instead of TROY TROY TROY for the crowd chants, I’d suggest LIN-ZEE, rolls better… Oooh boy, this thing is breaking down now, and serving as a nifty setup for what I assume will be a Keyes / Noble fight at the paperview… RICHIE WINS! RICHIE WINS! DO YOU BELIEVE IN MIRACLES?! YES!!... Solid work folks, everyone got shine, pushed things forward, kept things moving, can’t really do much more for a go home show.
RANK UP YOUR GAME SON
So, now that he doesn’t have the Cool Shades, does this mean he’s no longer BIG KING COOL?... Also, solid message being conveyed, get it right or get out, simple, to the point, didn’t need 5 pages of meandering ramble, so it didn’t use it to say what it needed to say.
DUSTY & EUGE vs RYAN & BOOYA
First I want to say that I’m sorry for being a big bucket of fail, and not adding my own intro or really doing anything to help with this… Fourth Wall Smash!... Good heel taunting… Good sequence there where Dusty & Euge work over Booya, both of them getting some shots in… Ryan working the subs, showing Euge’s inexperience with the ground game, like it… MOAR! Fourth Wall Breakage in the commentary, hah… OUTSTANDING use of tags in this match, including the “false tag” for the babyfaces that Doyle didn’t see and thus cuts off the “hot tag”... Constant double team action by the Diamonds, good stuff… HOT TAG ACTION!... HEELS CUT THAT SHIT OUT IN A HURRY… DUSTY AND RYAN IN THE RING AT THE SAME TIME!!!... BOOO!! Cut off by the moron Booya, haha… WHOOO BABYFACE SAVE BY EFF DEE JAY!!... CURTIS PENN!!! PANDA BEAR LINOLEUM!!!... Euge’s Wedding Tackle?! hahaaaaaahahaha, that’s a good one… BOOM! Executive Decision… WE COMIN FOR YEEEEW, NIGGA!... Serious though, dunno why Dames was worried about this match, it was good stuff start to finish, you just gotta… BOOOOOOLIEEEEEEVE! *thumbs up*