Deacon
Member
I have a project that I'm nearing completion on and would like some feedback from this group, at least those who are willing to supply it. I have 16 introductory roleplays for a collection of wrestlers. Some of these you'll know - Deacon, Eli Flair, even an early version of Tsunami. Most you won't. What I'm wondering is:
Is the character is coming through?
Do I have weak spots in the writing, and if so, how would you do it to bring that out?
If you have a history with page layout/design, I'd love to get some feedback on that, and if you can provide it for the larger project, that would be great, as I have limited design abilities and am just trying to make it look professional enough.
You can drop me a PM w/ how best to get the pdf file to you (and it's pretty big and 1.7MB). I'll send as I can and you can respond when you get a chance.
wf
Is the character is coming through?
Do I have weak spots in the writing, and if so, how would you do it to bring that out?
If you have a history with page layout/design, I'd love to get some feedback on that, and if you can provide it for the larger project, that would be great, as I have limited design abilities and am just trying to make it look professional enough.
You can drop me a PM w/ how best to get the pdf file to you (and it's pretty big and 1.7MB). I'll send as I can and you can respond when you get a chance.
wf
