Since I wrongly asked for some feedback on my RP in the RP Appreciation thread (dumb blonde moment...wait...I aint even blonde...okay, just me being me) I thought I would start my own thread and ask for feedback from anyone willing to give me any.

I feel as if it would be interesting to see the views and opinions of people from different feds from all over the place.

I'm fine with any kind of feedback, positive or negative, I'm always trying to better my RP's and learning about what people think works and what doesn't.

Thanks in advance to anyone who replies here.

Matt a.k.a Stacy Jones