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    FEEDBACK! Hot Springs - IGCC Unlucky for Some 2013 Tour

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    Feedbax are appreciated!

    Hope you enjoy the show.

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    Re: FEEDBACK! Hot Springs - IGCC Unlucky for Some 2013 Tour

    Does V/O mean voice over? I read the whole thing. Good job writing all that stuff. I like all the characters we got here.

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    Re: FEEDBACK! Hot Springs - IGCC Unlucky for Some 2013 Tour

    Hey Todd, V/O does indeed equate to Voice Over.

    Thanks for the feedback. Glad you enjoyed it.

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    Re: FEEDBACK! Hot Springs - IGCC Unlucky for Some 2013 Tour

    Moar feedback! Probably going to spoiler out some things, so don't read this before you've read the show.

    - "Previously in Louisville" was a good highlight of the big-time stories from the last show. I'm always a fan of this sort of thing - when there's any amount of time elapsed between shows, it's good to keep everyone's memory refreshed.

    - "Cough Cough" is a cool jam.

    - Magnus's entrance I thought was great...a very visual and visceral sign that he's working towards a new era that will cast a pall over IGC as long as he's champion. His demonic summoning of El Cabron with a "...teh fuck?" type of reaction made me smile.

    - I'm glad the jobbers are being used for more than easy fodder for handlers; it's giving some very nice flavor to the undercard and just generally good storytelling. The WREX Hardcore Title as a non-sanctioned championship that the jobbers are fighting (and screwing each other over) for is a really fun idea.

    - Me and Sylo's seg, following up on our RP back-and-forth where Sylo's main goal is for Ocho to get super-dark, even if Ocho has been resisting it as best as he can. I did enjoy the nod to some of Atken's complaints on the last card that Ocho's the IGC's cash cow, and it plants seeds for future Ocho/Murphy stories (or at least, the possibility for the stories). And last man standing = Ocho's gonna BLEEEEEED.

    - Selling Todd Killings's DDT so well was pretty hysterical and awesome, as was the earlier mention of making sure he doesn't bring a gun to the match. Todd, I don't know if you're a troll or not, but I don't think I mind either way; it's a funny style to me. A fun three-way dance, and kudos to Hendrix for picking up a W in his debut.

    - I hope MotP is able to come back in the near future; I really enjoy the team and think it's got a lot of potential for fun. Great to have Funicide come in to piss on the parades of two teams that have fun-loving characters, and have TENSIONS MOUNT~

    - I'm glad SOMEONE's looking out for Kyle...I was thinking about tossing up a segment in regards to that storyline with Xoesh, but felt that I was already spread out in so many places at once that it wouldn't be feasible. But who was the voice off-screen?? INTRIGUE!

    - lol Harmattan.

    - JESSE RAMEY SIGHTING! He's going to be great to have around IGC, and it's fun that he and Xoesh have a launching pad for a feud together. Mad Dog is awesome, and I'm glad he was able to get back on track with a story-moving W. Loved the interaction between Pearce and August Monday, and the non-breaking table spot.

    - I have a feeling I know who cut the Ocho-centric vignette, but I can't be quite sure...surprising for me to see it, for sure. The rare time the dad likes Ocho and the kid doesn't! Though, the dad would be foolish to want to be Ocho there - Ocho wouldn't be any good at a PS3 game

    - Holy one man wrecking crew. REALLY puts Magnus over as this giant monstrous force. It feels like that's been the recurring theme for a lot of this card, and that's important to do when you want to make a shift in a company's feel.

    - Third time's a charm, as they say - looking forward to an awesome battle with Straws. Though it's not something I had originally thought of, I think there's a lot of potential in the story that "Ocho was getting mauled by Sylo and may be in for it even worse against Magnus". He never really did embrace the hate in the way Sylo envisioned; but this probably makes sense for Ocho's character in that he's coming into his own, no longer a rookie, and establishing his own identity while not necessarily caring what others wanting him to be (because he's already resonating with fans by being himself). The imagery of a crimson mask underneath his bright red Mario mask was cool for me - as is the X in his chest at the end of the match.

    In the end, Magnus's interference in the match where two guys were trying to have a sort of "respectful brutality" towards each other gives Ocho a big reason to want to take Magnus down apart from "because title". It's pretty obvious that he will have to pull something from WAY deep down, otherwise he will be 0-3 in title shots and may be shoot murdered by a demonspawn.

    Fun read, Voss! Good work everyone! Psyched for the next leg on the tour.
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    Re: FEEDBACK! Hot Springs - IGCC Unlucky for Some 2013 Tour

    Really appreciate you giving this feedback, Ben. I'm glad you enjoyed the show and see the potential for programs. I really wanted to try and produce some triggers for bigger storylines on this show and I believe I achieved it. So, thanks for confirming that.
    Quote Originally Posted by brusch View Post
    Third time's a charm, as they say - looking forward to an awesome battle with Straws. Though it's not something I had originally thought of, I think there's a lot of potential in the story that "Ocho was getting mauled by Sylo and may be in for it even worse against Magnus". He never really did embrace the hate in the way Sylo envisioned; but this probably makes sense for Ocho's character in that he's coming into his own, no longer a rookie, and establishing his own identity while not necessarily caring what others wanting him to be (because he's already resonating with fans by being himself). The imagery of a crimson mask underneath his bright red Mario mask was cool for me - as is the X in his chest at the end of the match.

    In the end, Magnus's interference in the match where two guys were trying to have a sort of "respectful brutality" towards each other gives Ocho a big reason to want to take Magnus down apart from "because title". It's pretty obvious that he will have to pull something from WAY deep down, otherwise he will be 0-3 in title shots and may be shoot murdered by a demonspawn.
    I'll speak more on this later after MOAR FEEDBAX!

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    Re: FEEDBACK! Hot Springs - IGCC Unlucky for Some 2013 Tour

    This is probably the best show I think I've read in IGC. I think a lot of things are clicking and I really enjoyed reading it. Maybe its because my character had more interaction in it...I don't know for sure.

    Great read...lots of interesting possibilites developed...and I can't wait for the next show.

    While I still don't feel comfortable with my character...maybe that will come in time. I thought it had good potential when I created him, but so far I don't think I have transferred that into the RP I envisioned in my mind. Oh well. I hope to continue to develop it and maybe one day I can put up something respectable.

    Kudos to all the members here and it's nice to have Ramey in the fold...although it would be nice if he would've created a whacked out character to join the fold...a strong vet is a nice addition to the roster. Whoo hoo!

    Great job, Voss...and to everyone involved.

    Now about the proposed Gun Match...that would be really innovative...and I...

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    Re: FEEDBACK! Hot Springs - IGCC Unlucky for Some 2013 Tour

    Quote Originally Posted by Mad Dog View Post
    Now about the proposed Gun Match...that would be really innovative...and I...
    Thanks for the kind words Mad Dog. And didn't you hear Murphy? IGC won't house the next Brian Pillman.

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    Re: FEEDBACK! Hot Springs - IGCC Unlucky for Some 2013 Tour

    I'm happy with how my match turned out. I like that finger gun thing. That was cool. Like Cactus Jack or something. And it's also like Todd Killings was making fun of them for searching him before his match. I changed my move list slightly. http://www.fwrestling.com/showthread...-Todd-Killings Arm drags are cool. And I gave him a backdrop suplex. The one where you stand next to your opponent you know and pick them up and drop them on their back. Great show man. I like the website too. Are those sprites from Megaman or something what's that from?

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    Re: FEEDBACK! Hot Springs - IGCC Unlucky for Some 2013 Tour

    Quote Originally Posted by Mad Dog View Post
    This is probably the best show I think I've read in IGC. I think a lot of things are clicking and I really enjoyed reading it. Maybe its because my character had more interaction in it...I don't know for sure.

    Great read...lots of interesting possibilites developed...and I can't wait for the next show.

    While I still don't feel comfortable with my character...maybe that will come in time. I thought it had good potential when I created him, but so far I don't think I have transferred that into the RP I envisioned in my mind. Oh well. I hope to continue to develop it and maybe one day I can put up something respectable.

    Kudos to all the members here and it's nice to have Ramey in the fold...although it would be nice if he would've created a whacked out character to join the fold...a strong vet is a nice addition to the roster. Whoo hoo!

    Great job, Voss...and to everyone involved.

    Now about the proposed Gun Match...that would be really innovative...and I...
    Me + create a new character = Never going to happen.

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    Re: FEEDBACK! Hot Springs - IGCC Unlucky for Some 2013 Tour

    I found the images on Google search and it was some dude's Deviant Art account. He was making them for pro-wrestlers and someone asked if they could use the template and he was like "I don't care. Just don't say the template is yours".

    So it's not mine. I'm just using it.

    I'll make sure I include the arm drag and the back suplex in the next show, Todd.

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    Re: FEEDBACK! Hot Springs - IGCC Unlucky for Some 2013 Tour

    Nice show VossMan. I really liked how even though the matches are relatively short, all the characters get a chance to shine and the respective personality of each guy comes out during the match. That's great.

    Kudos to Todd and Raucous for a good match - you guys both have super off the wall characters, like most of the roster I guess! Todd your writing is really unique and I look forward to seeing how you continue to develop the character.

    The Ocho-Sylo stuff was awesome and the right man definitely won. Looking forward to Ocho-Magnus, and also Atken hopefully getting back into the title scene again.

    Oh and Ramey iz gae. You're in nearly as many feds as Voss

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    Re: FEEDBACK! Hot Springs - IGCC Unlucky for Some 2013 Tour

    FEED BACK!

    Great well put together show, I enjoyed the intro to give a little hype to the Magnus segment. All the matches were good, enjoyed reading my match nice job to Hendrix getting the win! Seeing de Ocho going over Sylo and heading towards his third title shot is epic good work, Ben!

    Jesse Ramey in the mix? Like someone said above a vet in the locker room is always a good thing. As far as Xoesth, I enjoyed roleplaying against the character a lot actually and now Jesse Ramey has a bone to pick with the Man from the Moon!

    HARMATTAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    My brother was eating a Swiss Cake Roll today after I read the show and I really was tempted to smash it in his face and yell Harmattan….I was high also so that would explain that idea.

    Well put together show, all the segments were great, matches were great even the short forms I enjoyed reading!

    And really, Todd Killings lol. This guy makes me lol, I advocate a ladder match with a .22 hanging on a rope and both wrestlers have to wear bullet resistant vests. Shoot the other one to win. .22 with a vest won’t kill anyone…

    Unless Todd puts the gun to his head and pulls trigger instead of his finger…what a mess….
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    Re: FEEDBACK! Hot Springs - IGCC Unlucky for Some 2013 Tour

    The only way I can see a gun match working is if it's paintballs...but then you have to figure there'd be a "splatter zone" in the fans' section...plus, it's just...no. Probably won't work.
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    Re: FEEDBACK! Hot Springs - IGCC Unlucky for Some 2013 Tour

    So, it might not shock you but I have been thinking about this and how this works.

    http://youtu.be/805t_qFTgy8

    Maybe there could be something come out of this afterall but I REALLY want this to be validated by some build up and that means you need to provide me with some segment work @Todd Killings to make it happen. You also need to find someone who would be willing to participate in this with you though by the sounds of it... @John Doe might be keen.

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    Re: FEEDBACK! Hot Springs - IGCC Unlucky for Some 2013 Tour

    Great work as always, man. Really enjoyed this card top to bottom, and really happy to hear my contributions went over well.

    Realized I fucked up by not posting the Triangle of Tyranny bio like I intended. Case in point, Gollomoch came across more like Dulak the Defiled... a cringing punching bag, as opposed to an obese enforcer. Again, I'll own up to that for not getting the bio posted. I'd get it posted soon.

    Was torn on Magnus' involvement in the main event. Always happy to see Destructo being an overall ass-hat trying to steal every ounce of spotlight, but the rivalry between Sylo and Ocho seemed to be on a completely different level. I guess it's within the character to be try and ruin what could have been a great moment between two major stars. Hope Sylo returns at some point to some extent, because it still feels like there's unfinished business with him and Magnus.

    Also enjoyed the continuation of Xoesh's abduction of Kyle. Maybe he'll turn up at a gas station and an altered personality. And the ability to move metal objects using his mind.

    El Cabron as an unsanctioned champion? I can roll with it.

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