Type: Posts; User: Evan H.
Really dig the Sons of the Soil at the top. I had a ton of fun writing all the Jane / Nicky/ White stuff jumping around to everyone's docs. The seg with Rayne and Elliot and the seg with Holiday and...
More can be great... just don't shoehorn all the more into "the backstage area"... put it somewhere else, do the more as a news bite or vignette.
S'all I'm sayin'.
I'm not saying "do more work" at all. The sheer amount of creativity on display with each card leaves me floored. I'm just saying utilize the other two platforms the awesome DEF website provides to...
I'm not talking work load, I'm talking spreading out the creativity and the storytelling to include more than just on cards. That's all. An active website full of neat stuff and bits popping up...
Everybody is holed away in their own arc docs and shit, the dead space between cards is killin' me... say with you will about RP's at least it filled the massive swaths of nothing going on between...
It's mostly graphical but its awesome for keeping things organized. Especially in the "incoming / shared with me" section which we all use so much.
As far as movesets and actual wrestling goes / the strengths and weaknesses... ALWAYS give a character some kryptonite. Use that weaknesses section to outline what truly makes your character...
So you're officially unofficially in, just wait for some combination of Jeff/Justin/James/Lindz to give you a thumbs up.
My advice, go back to the last PPV read that forward to get caught up,...
This character has legs. I vote yes.
One note? He sounds more like an edgy babyface than a heel, reading through everything.
Absolutely apply again, the fact you accepted feedback with such a good attitude is like 90% of the application process honestly.
Take some time and put together something new, we're here to help.
Tito Fuzzpot, Punchy Zahorian, Rich Spreadsauce, Ripper Blastbody, Ace Vanderhuge, Drew Queerstreet
Goddamn I'll never have to name another new character again...
You're obviously a talented writer. In a well run RP fed that appreciates good grammar and quality writing, you'd obviously whoop all sorts of ass. DEF is all sorts of angled though, rule one with an...
More back to be fed.
Match of the Night:
Noble / Holiday and all the six man offering were great.
Segment of the Night:
The Curtis Clutch segment that set up the seg I helped write where Penn barges into Ed's...
Glad to hear you had a good one duder.
Alternative name for Box.
WWE Developmental Random Name Generator
Could just as easily be called ewrestling character name generator...
(Itami = KENTA)
George Orwell's Brilliant Guide to Writing Well
Neat read. Figured it was applicable seeing...