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robert
04-02-15, 05:39 PM
Handler Information

Name: Robert Garrett
Email Address: roberag@bgsu.edu
Best Way to Contact You: PM, Email, or Facebook whatever is easiest
eWrestling Experience: Years of match based e-feds from EVPW and GHW, along with RP based at TEW and Thy WWE
How did you find DEFIANCE? Fed Vault

Writing Sample

Here's the thing. What we want here in DEFIANCE is for you to sell us on you as a handler. How you do that is up to you. Link us to an old segment. Write a new one. Link to a match you wrote. Just convince us that you want to be here and that you're worth having here.

This is the most important part of your application. I'm serious about that.
http://evpw.proboards.com/thread/11338/new-face-town

Wrestler(s) Information

Please take note of a couple things. It is highly likely that a few roster members will critique your moveset. Please don't be offended. We take that shit seriously here - we don't want a moveset full of finishers and a finisher so ludicrously over-elaborate that it couldn't be done in real life. This goes double if you're applying as a female wrestler. We also check to make sure your finisher(s) and theme song aren't currently being used. It's first come first serve when it comes to those.

And if you're one of those handlers who hates doing movesets, just say so and Jeff will do it for you.

Ring Name: Robert Garrett
Height: 6'2
Weight: 235

Hailing From: Columbus, Ohio (This is where your character is introduced as being from)

Alignment: Heel (Heel or Face? You may not play a Tweener without special staff permission)

Gimmick: A star with a large ego (Describe your gimmick. If your wrestler isn't heavily gimmicked then describe his/her persona.)

Wrestling Style: Fairly balanced style, with a bit of focus towards technical stuff(Tell us a little bit about what your wrestler does in the ring and the general psychology behind it.)

Three Weaknesses: Sore loser, ego tends to get in the way, doesnt work well with others

Three Strengths: Confident in his skills, is a natural at everything he does, great on the mic

MOVESET

Ten regular moveset moves:

1) Crucifix Powerbomb
2) Bicycle Kick
3) Boston Crab
4) Diving Double Foot Stomp
5) Diving DDT
6) Enziguri
7) Hair Pull Backbreaker
8) Sitting dropkick
9) Sugarhold Full Nelson
10) Short Arm Elbow Smash

2-5 trademark moves:

1) Arcane Arrow (Spear)
2) Double Underhook DDT
3) Superman Punch

1 Finishing Move: Natural Selection (back suplex cutter)

1 "MDK" (murderdeathkill) Finishing Move (Optional): Star Power (Guillotine Choke)

QueenOfTheRing
04-02-15, 09:06 PM
Before I even look at the writing sample, I'm going to need to see something more from the gimmick than just "d-bag egomaniac who thinks he's a big shot." We've got a handful of those on the roster now, all with a unique twist. What's your twist?

Ulfric
04-02-15, 09:13 PM
I read the writing sample. My answer is no.

PositivelyKen
04-02-15, 09:39 PM
I agree with Lindz in that this is an extremely generic character based on what you've written here. You'll need to spice this up to make him unique.

The writing sample is middle of the road at best. This fed has a relatively high level of writing calibre. You might want to sample a few of our recent cards, as well as some posts on the Propaganda board, and get a sense of whether you see yourself as a good fit in DEFIANCE.

RyanMatthews
04-02-15, 10:18 PM
Okay so the app was not the greatest (generic, sorry I tried to be a bit nicer) and the writing sample is somewhat short, unorganized (were it not for the things on either side of the name I wouldn't be able to separate speaking from exposition) and multi-colored. To the point where it made my head hurt trying to read it.

No